The fonts and colors are bold, and the use of the 12 as the word "in" was clever of you. The piece is graphic, and the contrast between the white and green, and the red and the rest of it make it really stand out, and the letters stand out. The second and third lines have different types of fonts, yet they still go together. Putting the word "be" inside of "ever" is a great idea, and it adds to the very graphic, bold feel. Stomping on it was not such a good idea. I can see why you would want some texture, put the lines running across it look like the image has been damaged physically. And the foot treads are in the middle, but not anywhere else, so it doesn't look like a texture, but more like art that has been stepped on. If I were you, I would have maybe sprayed it or splashed it with some kind of paint to give it texture, but I would have done it consistently and spread over the page instead of just in the middle.
Impressive. It's interesting that you actually printed this, to me it looked like it was completely digital and vector based, I was going to ask how you did it. Awesome work!
The fonts and colors are bold, and the use of the 12 as the word "in" was clever of you. The piece is graphic, and the contrast between the white and green, and the red and the rest of it make it really stand out, and the letters stand out.
The second and third lines have different types of fonts, yet they still go together. Putting the word "be" inside of "ever" is a great idea, and it adds to the very graphic, bold feel.
Stomping on it was not such a good idea. I can see why you would want some texture, put the lines running across it look like the image has been damaged physically. And the foot treads are in the middle, but not anywhere else, so it doesn't look like a texture, but more like art that has been stepped on. If I were you, I would have maybe sprayed it or splashed it with some kind of paint to give it texture, but I would have done it consistently and spread over the page instead of just in the middle.
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